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Product Design: Mom's Healthy Secrets needs your inspiration. This cereal deserves to be seen!

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  • almost 2 years ago

    Masswear

    I really like the "secret"-lid! Great!
  • almost 2 years ago

    mavin

    I like the paper optics very much! ;-D
  • almost 2 years ago

    mia

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    however just this one is so big in presantion, but it's scrap of no sale value.
    such a window i know from noodle-packaging mutch better integrated.

    1* - you better re-start and read a elementary book of typography before,
    esp. all in center is always boring.
  • almost 2 years ago

    Frieda

    @ mia: oh, what happened to your comment? why is there so much space? i saw red11rabbit having the same problem with one of his idea descriptions. please make sure you don't copy in comments or desriptions from a different programme (e.g. words) without checking that formating has been cleared. thanks ahead!
  • almost 2 years ago

    mavin

    @ mia
    why so angry excited, mia? we will all have things we need to learn ...
  • almost 2 years ago

    Paulos idea owner

    With this draft I just wanted to show an idea.
    till the contest isn´t over the the works don´t have to be perfectly finished.
    in this period or otherwise I would be carful with words like "scrap".
  • almost 2 years ago

    mia

    @marvin: i am not angry, i saw it as unconvincedly sketch and miss fundamentals.
    that´s pre-published ok, but not good assessable and unexpected for me here.

    if studied or unstudied, to read a good book is always a good tip, isn't it?
    for example: http://www.typografie.de/ has such good, (elemantary) books.

    ps: i wil fix the problem with space.
  • almost 2 years ago

    Janne

    Great update! The typo is better now and I also like that huge corn ear. One minor point: do you relly think the outline of the lid is necessary? I think it could do without. And there is much space in the upper half of the package. I think there could be some improvement.
    Go ahead!
  • almost 2 years ago

    Paulos idea owner

    thank you Janne for your comment . I will look once again for improvements.
  • almost 2 years ago

    gaborrieger

    i like it ... the "secret dot" is very nice :-)