Think of a crossover betwen X-MEN + KICKASS + SCOTT PILGRIM + LIEFERHELD
Who is Patrick and what does him make a Lieferheld?
I will tell you the Story aof a "normal" Guy!
more coming soon !
Looking forward to this! It seems very interesting!
hahahahahahah! damn you!
Really funny, but I think »Lieferheld« must also be serious.
i think this symphatic "allday" superhero is serious enough. and briefing is looking for a humorous hero. so i think this would fit perfectly.
yea, i can see it now... a hero at your doorstep.. but he's just a regular guy, or is he??.... hmm... lol
WhaHaaaaaaaaaaaa. Great. Love it. I believe in Patrick.
Yeeaaahhhh. Thanks Bert.. now i have tell you the secret od his superpowers ;)
I think his cover is perfect! He looks damn slow! This is pretty humorous!!!
you got it ! Thanks H2O
Is he supposed to be that slow when he is delivering food? I do like the look of him! I am hoping that the he is super fast and that is the fun part of it.
he looks slow ....thats the point!
think of all Superheros....they have all in common: they live a double life.
Peter Parker ( Looser ) -Spiderman
Bruce Wayne (Lonely billionaire) -Batman
Dr. Bruce Banner (scientist) - Hulk
Tony Stark (cool playboy ;)- Ironman
Clark Kent (boring Newsman)-Superman
now it´s time for
Patrick (slow smpathic guy) - SUPERFAST Lieferheld with extrem powers.
i will update his vita next days
his friend his enemies .... is superpowers.
There will be situations no normal guy can handle in the food delivery job.
No one except PATRICK aka LIEFERHELD
Like : traffic jam, crazy dogs, femme fatales, bad guys, Catastrophe, Earthquakes, monsoons, skyscrapes...the worl of Lieferhelden is full of challanges no normal gu could handle like Patrick.
I really like the idea of normal poeple being a hero for lieferhelden!
Lieferhelden is just a service not a fixed team of deliverer. Thats why this approach makes a lot of sense to me and it will be easy to provide some promotion stuff like bildfolds for those heroes. Can be expandet in many directions like voting for the fastest or most sexy lieferhelden on facebook or lieferhelden.de. = )
Good Luck ! Great Idea!
Many many Thanks for the love and the good inspiration Jesko!
UPDATE: First Chapter of Patricks Superhero Story now online!
Sounds like a funny idea...it can work! Good job!
it will, thanx Yair!
I see him falling in love with an impossible girl, delivering her favorite food everyday, (not that she ordered anything of course) making a fool of himself, waiting outside on the rain for her... actually, I just gave you a perfect villain. =)
yeah perro i was working on that typ of impossible girl...later today i will update the story includig both girl and villain. cool we share that thought. But there will be also an accident ( the source of his superpower) ;)
Fucking Zooey Deschanel. I hate her.
yesss siiirr ;)
fuck ! this is amzing mind-synchro ... just check my update Perro ;)
I know that kind of b*tch. Believe me.
check this out btw.
what a funny hero! love you concept!:)
thanks a lot bonibom. great you like it!
let's see... he generally likes Will Smith movies, he has a subtle myopie, he liked la macarena at its moment, in his bank account there are just 300. He sucks at rapping. He only knows how to make pasta, he had sex five month ago the last time. he's a regular guy.
sounds like him ;)
Update: Kapitel 2 - the impossible girl and the villian!
Kapitel 3 coming soon
Our hero discovers his Superpowers.
the destiny of Lieferheld.de and of Olivia will be in Patrick Parkers hands.
check out the newspaper article about vincent van cold. This mans only goal is to make germany a "servicewüste" ....no service no warm food no happy people. it´s an apocalyptic and frightening vision of a man you never had the right service in his life although he ( his father) owns billions !
Wow, love the way you tell the story... Congratulations.
thx! all hero created here on jovoto should join a ELITE Hero Squad ;)
Nice concept. And i like the details about Lieferheld. I´d like to see your lieferheld in action, that would be cool ;)
thx toolhead !
I like your story so far. Not so convinced yet with Patrick´s looks. So I´ll wait with my rating until you´ve shown us his real power and his secret behind... ;o)
...can´t wait to tell you more ;)
The update is really great!
An interesting idea. makes me think about "truth " of the superheroes we know. I like your vision.
it´s dfferent approach... and it´s all about the story. Hope people like it.
thx caguana for your comment
man! you are alive! =) thanks god. don't let it go!
man, i´m loosing game ... don´t know why ...story is funny and characters are hollywood ;(
i hope you can score ! All the best ;)
and Vincent van Cold is on the level with Gerd Fröbe aka Erik Goldfinger !
Vincent van Cold, hahahahahaha. This character is brilliant!
;) thx ... i like him cause i dont like him !
Vincent Van Cold...!!!
Keep going, we´re all waiting for more!!
Updates are coming along nicely. I think that you are getting a well thought out solid back story here. Good work.
short update peeps ! habaneros rules !
Most funny story in this contest!
thx a lot Bert! hopefully it pays off...looks like it does´t ;(
i love it :)))))
can u make up ur own characters like others hav?
nice idea, but the slogan costs you 1 points... ;)
no more obama slogans please! thanks :D
maybe you should create your own characters and ideas
i follow Obama on facebook...what´s the deal ? ;)
called it FANWORK!
damn. i lost! :D
hehehe ;) high five Mosh !
la idea is cool , but Obama?
Your layouts are great, but could you make a short description of the story for non German speakers. It´s nice to see other characters without muscles and not dressed in tights.Thank you and good luck
Super!, der Mann hat Zukunft :-DD