The stars and constellations is a nice motif. If there was a way to bring the details out a little more, I think it would have more impact. Maybe add a shooting star. It would bring to mind "wish upon a shooting star". Which is a nice sentiment to think about when making a toast with wine. A minor thought, but it could be a cool addition. Good work!
Thank you , curtis , really appreciating ! It's a good idea , will think about it!
Very beautiful and fine work, Ioana! My immediate thought was - how can this design support the idea of breaking the rules and "making your own traditions"? Otherwise, it is a real classic. ;)
Good luck! Diana
Thank you , Diana! I am just working on an update to make this more close to this concept :) Updating soon .
Thank you, Davide, we made an update on the concept :)
By the way, a thumbs up from the client as well. They are looking forward to the concept update. And it would be so great to have your back and front bottles on a neutral and contrasting background. I have left a comment under the brief about this as well. Otherwise, it is so hard to see what is on the bottle and what is the background.
Cheers, Diana
Hi Diana, thank you for your feedback! I've just updated the concept to be more close to the brief and made some minor changes on the design. Hope it's better now! :)
Oh, better indeed! I would just add something here in the text: " If you cannot enjoy the night sky, make your own tradition and replace it with a glass of sparkling starry wine!" It's easier then to connect it to the claim.
Good luck! Diana
So in love with this dreamy elegant design!! This bottle would make the perfect gift for someone special! Love it!! :)
Thank you so much for the kind words ! :) Glad you like it!
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