For my original idea, I tried to show a connection between two people using a computer.  However, the final product did not match my vision and was met with a poor rating and negative criticism. 

I kept the same theme for this update, but have tried to think more abstractly about what a computer is.  This got me thinking about circuits and electricity.  So now I have depicted two people connected only by an electric charge.  There is a direct current flow between the two people, which represents the immediate and constant flow of information that takes place when using Social Media tools.