Even the darkest cloud has a silver lining
Nice and promising concept Alex, I like your headline a lot!!! Keep going!
thanks a looooot ! I made an update. hope you like it
This is a great concept and it fits the subject perfectly. It shows, that there is a way out!
Thaaaanks H20 !!! I made an update. Hope you like it
I think you are heading in the right direction! But i'm still missing something in your new artwork. In the first picture you see the silver lining because the cloud is moving. The wind is pushing the dark cloud away, so you will see the sun again. For the given task the wind is just a metaphor. If you are struggling with a depression the wind would be help from others or at least medical care. I think you also need to show this in your artwork. I hope you understand what mean and it's not totally confusing. If you have any questions, just ask.
really happy for your feedback...I have made the change...It makes a biiig difference.
I welcome any other suggestions. Thanks again !!!!!
Really good idea! :)
Thaaaanks Steve ! hope you like the update
Nice start - great to see your concept sketch Alex!
Which medium are you going to use for your artwork?
thanks a lot Dora !!!
I'm not sure yet. I guess we will both be surprised :))))
I made an update. Hope to hear what you think. Thanks !!!!
I think, that´s a right start ;) Curious to your work....
thanks a lot Lemo !!!!! I made an update just now. take a look. Hope you like it
Good update ;) One thing I miss, is the sun in background to make the silver lining, with the rays and the bright light...
I made the change. I think this is what you were talking about.... Thanks a hole lot for the feedback
Yes, that´s what I was talking about ;)
Maybe you try to bring a little bit warm colour in your work to underline the sunlight with its positive aspect? In the pic, I see it ;) Haha, then I stop....
I'm with Elli, you're going into the right direction Alex!
another great suggestion !!! I made the change, thanks a lot for helping me improve it !!!
You´re welcome! Now your great idea is perfect expressed in artwork, for me!!
thanks a lot ! it means a great deal to me because I'm just starting with graphic design. So any future help and suggestion are really more then welcome. And thanks for the love :)))
I like it! But only if this is your submission too – I hope so:
:))) the image is not mine obviously. This is just to show the CONCEPT of my idea. I am working on the graphic right now.
Ah ok! :) Great. I'm curious to see more! Good luck!
I made the update I was talking about.
didn't keep you waiting to much :)))
:) Wow! Good idea! But there is a spelling mistake. You wrote "Sliver" and not "Silver". And i agree with H2O to put more wind in your artwork to keep the depression away. :) Good luck!
Sliver :)))) pfffffff. Thanks a lot for the feedback. I made some changes. Hope this is closer to what you were talking about. Thanks again
Much better! I like! :)
thanks a looot ! I made another change to bring more of a positive effect. Hope you like it
good job my friend!!!!