My idea is based on how our mind is a whole universe trapped that sometimes gets overwhelmed by all worldwide situation and how the digital era give us all the tools so we can focus and developed our ideas intro successful situations
Follow the Leader
Hi Denisse, I like how you combined the girl with the city! Well done! I wonder if you can brighten up the poster. Make it less pessimistic and more bright. Also, I'd change the position of the walking man, now it looks like he is walking on her head. Maybe you can move him in front of her, as if they have eye contact (he's already looking down and she's looking up). Hope that's helpful. Cheers!
Hello Andrei! I took your advice on the colors and I think it looks way beter tho I kept the position of the man because I think it makes a balance on the composition.
Thanks a lot :) best regards.
Hi Denisse! Welcome to the DB Digital Leader. I think you're off to a great start and with a creative sprint and some tweeks I believe your poster will catch people's attention.
I suggest that you read through the Client Feedback at the bottom of this link, there is a lot of good insight there. https://www.jovoto.com/projects/follow-the-leader/briefing
Good luck, 8 days to go!
Hello Per :) I made an update on the colors of my idea so I was thinking it'd be nice if you could remove the last 4 slides on my project so only the bright ones stay.
Poster looks good, i do agree it needs bit of lifting in terms of colours.
Hi Parmeet! I took yours and Andrei advice to bright out the colors and I think it looks way better, I hope you think so too.
Thanks a lot and best regards!!
Hi again Denissa. I like it now with the brighter shirt. What about making the background a bit more cheerful? Maybe a bit more yellow/orange. Now the shirt is colorful, but the backgrond is still kind of cold. Read the halftime feedback, they are asking for positive posters. Yours give me the feeling of "I remember something and I'm nostalgic". Make it more alive:d Hope this will help you. Andrei.
I find this to be one of the best looking posters around here. I like the link to the story. She wants to change the world, but she didn't know, something was missing in her bubble, so she is staring to the left of the poster, but meeting Peter, which is oriented to the right, having the right skills to change the city. Perhaps the whole poster would had been even more dynamic if the girl would look over her shoulder towards the city, but it's only a hunch, and it's too late anyway at this stage of the contest. Best of luck!
Hi Sabin!!! I really appreciate you feedback :D thank you very much!!! :D
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