face the grid
hi there you win a crown ;-) I'll change it but tomorow , do you like it??
it isn't informative enough. i know nothing more about GXS than before i saw it.
yes it's true but you have the little text and this is a preliminar that hopefuly will catch your attention to read the rest.... don't you think?
I like the idea behind. I think the copy is okay and the claim actually says what GXS is about. Perhaps your visuals could hint to certain businesses that work with GXS - face and logo might be a bit too general... Looking forward to more. ;o)
I'll try to use the grid to pass the messages using a computer language but I'll try to improve it thankxx....
nice stile 10 stars-3stars(bad graphic) = 7 Stars:2=3.5 stars
You miscounted. It´s 10+3=13 and 13:2= 6,5* :P
I'll prefer the Janne count is better to me and don't understand the bad graphic with the nice style but ok ....
I like your concept and the professional graphic. Very good typographie. The first idea how works with the grid. I love it! 10*
thankxxxx a lot because what is important is the message passed trough the grid and how to use it and work with it....
the copy at the bottom of the page does not match the visual. plus it is just a long wordy repeat of their existing copy.
perhaps a smiley face is as much complexity as jovoto community can comprehend. but they are not the target audience. they will never be in a position to need GXS services. so try to give your idea a deeper correlation to the actual technology, instead of pandering to cliches.
you are right about the bottom copy but I'm affraid that if I removed it someone will tell me that I'm off the briefing.... I'll try to do something with that part because I really don't like cliches ah ah .... any genial ideas????
GXS doesn't need a designer or a writer to restsate their existing copy. they could have done that themselves. you need to first understand that copy yourself, then summarize it in a nutshell, hopefully in a more symbolic way. your visual should do the same, and right now it doesn't at all. the jovoto retards of course rate it highly, so if your motivation is money, then don't change it.
ok my motivation is not money but I allways don't insist in ideas that stay back.... so I'll keep looking for new ideas
Now i changed The points from 3.5 To 6 points.
thankxx can you put them a little higher ;-)
I think maybe add a hand in the forground, moving the tiles, as if they are placing a tile into the grid? Something like that. You could then change the wording to "We shape the gride" or something like that? I dunno. Make the tiles out of clouds? Then, that would be cool. Like, tiles of clouds that a hand puts into place on the grid. Can you do that? If I had the photoshop skills, I'd give it a try, but I don't have the skills. Hahaha.
I think this is a good project
really simple and friendly, good for relaxing people on the problems of labor management!
Simple and beautiful. 9
Well done :)
Smart and simple - wish you success!
nice! 9* for me