Children, Teenagers, Adult, Elder, ... Everyone don't want to miss the Halloren! And there is only one way to decide who can have all the Halloren! This means war! Tug Of War! So, Let's Tug O' War! Those who success pulling the Halloren to their side, they can have all the Halloren. Winner take its all!
Hehehe, let's fight fort the chocolate! :D I am sure this could attract a lot of attention because it looks quite attractive. Very good idea. Keep developing and make it top :)
I been thinking adding caption " Pull! Pull!", " Harder!" " We won!"... How's is it?
'pull pull' sounds great, 'harder' not so much imo :D Keep up with good work, you're on a good way!
New updates have adding shadow and refining of the images, plus caption! There are two concepts. Which one do you like?
Quick Updates! Re-positioning and re-sizing of some figures and images to give more window's view!
Nice idea to involve the door-opening, like that! I´m not 100% convinced of the text content in your speech-ballons yet, could imagine something with more relation to the claim maybe. But I think the general idea and design are nice!
Funny and cute idea. Good work! Maybe the speechbubbles are not necessary to make your idea clear..
Ok. I have done that before... at the beginning. You can have a look at the last few slides.
Are there anyone can critic my work? I don't know what to improve and updates my work!
looks amazing...only the text could be more big...for all that see the tram at distance...but a like it alot :)))
I have problems with the text! First, the size. If big enough from a clear distance view, it will cover >20% of windows which is not permitted in the project. Secondly, I try with less wording, but unable to relate with Halloren's product effectively! Can you suggest something? Or it is better to abandon the text and balloons?
You can take the balloons with texts in a high position on the tram more over the windows...and make them more big...it will look more fun ;))) and you will have not problem with the covered area of windows..what do you think??? :) In the top area of tram I mean ;)
Why I never thought that before? I will done it right now! Thanks for the advice! New updates will be ready by tommorrow!
I like this idea! Very good! For my taste the speach bubbles aren't necessary. But - lets wait what the client say :D
A very nice idea! I like the effect is expanded from the door! This creates a dynamic image. Well done Leonard! :)
funny idea! I think as donner-mayer already mentiond, the speechbubbles are not necessary.
About speech bubbles, it is really hard to decide! I have done it without speech bubbles at first (the last 4 slides is the one without speech bubbles.) But, some of my friends tell me my design required words to match Halloren because the image by itself is fun, but no Halloren in it! Myself prefer the speechless one!
it´s a very attractive idea, with bubbles or not! Let´s tug for Halloren ;o)) Good luck!
Ha! Ha! :))) Really nice approach! So if you want Halloren chocolates you need to fight for it! :))) Very cool idea Leonard! An inovative one! Well done!
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