I like the idea of 'my first cloud'it is a very personal approach. I would keep in mind that Cisco is asking this to be brand neutral. I think that if you focus on the my first cloud it would bring more attention to the concept.

Thx. for your feedback. This is definitely food for thought ...

wwcheers

Unfortunately I can't change the tagline in my last update within the last hour until the contest expires.

Wording should be better MY/YOUR FORST CLOUD ...

ww

The idea was right up their with everyone else,Rrealy cool and please don't listen to me I'm only a few day's old here, If i was to say something constuctive ,My opinion is in your opening statment you should always stay positive and and you don't want to put doubt. But it does move: (sounds to me like someone waiting for something) & being the first at somthing is good almost all the time. Almost :)......I hope I've helped. Maculla

Thx. for your interesting feedback Maculla.

I didn't realize touching someone else's idea, in case of it wasn't on purpose. I count on the jovoto contest guides for clearing it up ...

Your remarks: My idea is supposed to be a direct reference to Galilei Galileo ... But it does move ... Here: Cisco comes up with a solution/conclusion - actually in opposite of putting doubts (I hope) ... But IT does move (it/aitee)

So the message could be: Cloud computing is not that big thing and doesn't block large financial resources or internal IT-Manpower - even for small and smaller companies. In other words: There is no reason to feel fear of contacts with a diffuse topic ...

All in all: I'm a non-native speaker and of course I'm not quite sure if those "mental splits" are capable to achieve th(a)t goal :-l

wwregards

The design is realy small and clear. So the focus is on the product. :-)