I like the idea of 'my first cloud'it is a very personal approach. I would keep in mind that Cisco is asking this to be brand neutral. I think that if you focus on the my first cloud it would bring more attention to the concept.
Thx. for your feedback. This is definitely food for thought ...
Unfortunately I can't change the tagline in my last update within the last hour until the contest expires.
Wording should be better MY/YOUR FORST CLOUD ...
The idea was right up their with everyone else,Rrealy cool
and please don't listen to me I'm only a few day's old here,
If i was to say something constuctive ,My opinion is in your opening statment you should always
stay positive and and you don't want to put doubt.
But it does move: (sounds to me like someone waiting for something) & being the first at somthing is good almost all the time. Almost :)......I hope I've helped.
Thx. for your interesting feedback Maculla.
I didn't realize touching someone else's idea, in case of it wasn't on purpose. I count on the jovoto contest guides for clearing it up ...
Your remarks: My idea is supposed to be a direct reference to Galilei Galileo ... But it does move ... Here: Cisco comes up with a solution/conclusion - actually in opposite of putting doubts (I hope) ... But IT does move (it/aitee)
So the message could be: Cloud computing is not that big thing and doesn't block large financial resources or internal IT-Manpower - even for small and smaller companies. In other words: There is no reason to feel fear of contacts with a diffuse topic ...
All in all: I'm a non-native speaker and of course I'm not quite sure if those "mental splits" are capable to achieve th(a)t goal :-l
The design is realy small and clear. So the focus is on the product.