Hi Marco, Good concept, I hope there are no animals nearby think it is a pet door ;D think about it in a higher level. Good luck :)
Many Thanks. Of course, I will present the concept even more beautifully :-) The main idea is not really new. Allegedly, Le Corbousier, among other things in his plans for the Unité d'habitation (The Housing Machine) thought about supplying apartments from outside with food. But still without technical devices. New in the idea is to do it through the door. Main benefit is: you can upgrade every Front-Door in a house or flat with this solution. In the technical way ist one more part in a smart home concept.
Hey, Marco!
I see where you are going with this, but to continue, I'd urge you to check Diana's last comment under the Briefing and my subsequent ones about the pain point visualization or explanation regarding the use of the slides!
Your Idea definitely is a solution to the main topic - cooled delivery in absence - but what specific user group are you targeting, what's their life like and what specific needs may they have in a cooled delivery? Maybe these questions can help and inspire a bit?
For example, safety could be your focus: Your target user is a hobby sommelier and sometimes orders extremely expensive wine online. Usually, these wines are bought from wine caves that store them at the right temperature and in darkness, and here you have a myriad of pain points to work with: Safety (really, my 4000€ bottle can NOT be stolen!), perfect temperature (8° is way too cold, but a few hours in 23° may affect the fine bouquet as well!), elegant design (I am sure a person who buys 4000€ wine does not want to compromise on the style of her home's entrance) etc... this is of course very very niche thinking and it lacks the future aspect a little, but I think it kind of illustrates how we can think about target groups and pain point solutions?
Thank you for joining! Best, Jana
Ok, i thought about it and some points you can find in the corretion :-)
Hi Marco, Nice update.. It is clearer now.. well done :D But I think you must replace the main visual image with another one without text (maybe 2nd slide). Good luck :)
Hey HichamBahr, thank you for your tip. In case of the jovoto presentation concept it is wrong to change the slide. But in case of a contetst you are right. It´s done :-)
Hello, I came back to check it :) Really nice visuals, I like the details and the fact that it is not visible from the outside.
Also very nice update, much clearer concept, I would just recommend using the words space for words, You have a slide with an image that is a bit overwhelmed with text, so using the image place for visual information and text space for verbal information would be much better I believe.
Good Luck :)
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