hi Jean, meine Idee ist etwas ähnlich, ich arbeite aber schon ne Weile dran, ich hoffe es stört dich nicht.....falls doch sag Bescheid.

zu deiner Idee, sieht schön aus :-), hat aber schon viel Ähnlichkeit mit Dorset cereals, oder?

Hi Clari, naja... also bei mir sollen es Fensterchen sein, durch die man das Muesli sehen kann... und es stört mich nicht wirklich;)

Dorset cereals kannte ich nicht und eine Ähnlichkeit sehe ich bis auf die Fensterchen auch nicht... Naja gut, braun is meins auch;)

Hmm, I'm afraid Clari is right... Jean, you should develop your idea so it does not resemble the package of Dorset Cereals so much :/

What's this idea to use the lipstick - mouth as a signet? That's very unusual... maybe you could work on this aspect, even though I am not sure if it fits the brand image!

hi Jean, bei mir sinds auch Fenster, ......danke das es dich nicht wirklich stört :-)

yes, it looks great! it's true, it is very close to the design of Dorset cereals...I think you'll make it, give it a particular form of.

Shit - i love those cut outs - but yes, it might be a bit to close. Maybe you can work on it and find a new way ? Good luck !

Hi, and thanks!!! :) And NO... this is not a copy from Dorset Cereals! (So blöd würde nicht mal ich sein! ;)) But i'll chance something in the next few days... perhaps colours and so on...

in-between wasa-logo and dorset-packaging, with look and feel of a a geometric dissection + a wicked touch -> undiscussible, respect the work of bigfish.co.uk and let delete it, until 1*

ps: every open eyed community'st here should vote so. something like that should normaly be auto-deleted.

I like the flying grains on top. Although the kiss is a great idea for a cereal made by Mom, it should be more integrated into the whole design imo - perhaps as part of the logo? Not sure about that... One minor point: it has to be VibraBerry with an "a" before the Berry.

Sooo, jetzt sollte niemand mehr eine Ähnlichkeit mit Dorset Cereals sehen... und wenn doch, dann weiß ich auch nicht mehr;)

@mia: without words!

yes it is a good continuation!

Jap. Much better now, Jean. = )

Did you try cut outs of fruits or the main topic/content of the particular product ? (To be even much more away from the competitor, if you like.)

Very Good. Now, the brighter continuation I can support too. Although I cannot become a friend of the kiss but that maybe personal preference. Is the Mom in love with you? Yes, probably! :-)

Mir ist der Kußmund auch zuviel, der gesamte Entwurf besticht durch seine Schnörkellösigkeit. Deshalb lieber weglassen ;-)

I wish I could remember which packaging uses this design, but I have definitely seen a very similar design for a granola-type product. This could be a potential trademark infringement issue and I would avoid this design.

I do admit, though that it's attractive.