thankssssssss !!!! :))))
Hi voinealex, straight forward and clear! What you can work in is to make it visually fit with Greenpeace as well.
I made a modification to tie it all together . Take a look
Better now! But I think the overall style needs to be more aligned with the brand as well. You can have a look here to get a better idea of Greenpeace style and tone of voice:
Thanks again Olof ! I made a big change that is in tune with the overall Greenpeace style. Please take a look.
The witch is made out of writing from the brief that explains what TTIP actually is. I think It would make people curios tot the point that they would read the "witch".
Wow, great update Alex, really good!
:)) Thanks a lot Monstro ! hope you also like the update.
very nice.Right color tones used with right expression.
THANKS !!!! :)))
Raff ich ned. I don’t get it. Could you please explain it to me, voinealex or the other ones?
The first one was clear: A beautiful apple is offered to us. It looks like a good one, but it is bad. It is genetically modified or has toxic pesticides inside. Great idea.
And now? What is offered to us? What is the cheat? What is real?
The world in form of an apple? Or the world in the evil’s hands? But why the apple form?
Curious about your answer(s) …
Hey Freierwolf !!! it was pretty much a concept until now. I realised it was a bit much and i was losing the core idea, also i wanted to aligne better with the greenpeace overall style.
The thing is that TTIP is like the poisoned apple given by the witch to Snow white, it looked appetising but it would actually kill her.
Hope it is clearer now.
Thanks a lot for you question.
My words. I understood the story with the poisened apple. But not the one with the earth apple.
Your new approach has the red apple again. And the graphic style fits better now.
Ah, great idea Alex! =)
I'd like to suggest the following to you:
On several occasions politicians and media tried to get to TTIP documents via official request. What they got where documents where all the relevant information was made unrecognizable with black ink.
You could modify your idea in a way where the remaining text looks like a witch. Or reverse it, so that the blackened out parts form a witch shape – what ever looks stronger.
AND you could apply this concept to several threatening image motifs like monsters or bio hazard signs. Many opportunities for a great campaign within this idea, already lovin it!!! =)
P.S.: I think this motif doesn't actually need the apple. For me the witch was strong enough and clear.
Great poster and idea! Well done! :]
:)) Thanks a lot Piotr !!!! I'm so happy to see that the message gets through
Very good on first page!
Thanks Sundesign !!!
The first slides were not consistent with the overall Greenpeace style. Happy to see you like the final form of my idea.
I like your concept, and this graphic versions works better, even the first version illustration is so good too :) great one anyway, Alex! :)
The first illustration wasn't actually mine, :)) it was to show the concept.
But the final one with the text is all mine :)) and closer to the overall Greenpeace style.
Thanks a lot Gusmonk !!!
Awesome message, Alex! Same smart message, two great illustrations!
:))) Thanks a lot for this great comment !!!! the message is most important and I am really happy it gets through to the viewer.
Awesome, Again good work
Hi Alex, great idea you got here and I got the impression that the client like as well. But maybe you can think about how you can make it feel a bit more modern. I think your main idea could be executed in many different ways. It would be super interesting to see this idea with a more modern touch/feel.
Great work so far!
This was the words of the client btw, just so you know!
Hi Olof, I've been thinking of the update and I finally found something more modern/guerilla. It sounds great in my mind but I have to put it down on paper ;) I will have it up by tomorrow morning in time for a last feedback from you before the contest ends and with a few hours left to make some minor changes if needed.
Thanks for the feedback,
Talk to you tomorrow.
Yey, looking forward! :D
It isn't quite morning :)) but I made the update and am am still working on a slide with a viewing machine that shows the witches when you look towards the politicians unaltered poster.
What do you think ?
Haha! Cool Alex. Curios to see how this could work in reality or how it could be used. Great update however!
a band of witches...
E X C E L L E N T !!!
Nice work! :)
First slide is great also the third as sabotage guerrilla action, good concept too ; )
Congrats, Voinealex!!!! Excellent work here!!!
And for the second time congrats Alex!!! :)
Congrats dear Alex :)
Congratulations Alex!! .D
Congrats once again Alex :))
Congrats Alex! :]
Congratulations again dear Alex! :)
CONGRAAATS AGAIN DEAR voinealex!!!
Congrats again dear voinealex!! :)
Ahhh, Kilgrave °_°
Congratulations again, Alex =)
Again? Oh you are GreaT! Congratulations!:D