this is looking great and I like the story. Maybe you could link your story to a concret produkt.
thanks for your comments Sarig, I'll take it in mind and work on it
Wow, very nice illustrations. The scene where the orca emerges from the water could be a great surprise moment in the spot, I likle that a lot!
As sarig suggested, if you link to eco-certificated fish products at PENNY at the end it could be even better.
thank you very much for the suggestions, I'll work on it! : D
haha, great one!!! I like the punchline :-) Though I feel sad about the animal... =)
do not worry, you think it was a real seal? nope... just Chuck Testa!
Thanks a lot! I feel much better about enjoying your idea now :-) Great one!
Great idea! I like the unusual setting- that it's very funny they would have a Penny nearby!
thanks for your comment!
The idea is good but it is very similar to this ad made for Penny - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FTt-aIZerWI
Great video, thanks for comment Domi. However, my idea is not a spot of action but rather something that is quiet and calm that is suddenly interrupted by a surprise. I understand that being told with a storyboard is not too clear about the timing of actions. On the other hand the search for food by humans is a long story, told in many ways. Between existing video and my proposal for the commercial, there's like 50 thousand years apart!
I can´t agree with DoMi, I´m sorry. Maybe the "situation" is a bit the same, but in the Penny´s clip the animal escapes while here it gets eaten by another animal. Also the complete surrounding is different...
I was thinking from Penny's point of view. They have very different type of TV ads, and maybe they don't want to see another group of primitive people hunting for food. Your idea is good, original and funny, I just try to be constructive, if I don't want to be, than I just say "awesome" and my karma gets fat :-)
nice illustration and concept
nice images. good good style!
Love the script and the illustration, nicely done,...
the illustrations are quite good, but the story could get a little bit more retouching to make it even greater
thanks to you all for comments :D!!!
Excellent work markocezar!!! Love your illustration style and the story!!!
Even if there some "violent issue" but this the reality of how nature is and it gives you a lot of surprise impact!!! So, First to Penny!!!
Great idea and beautilully done. ;o)
Well done..excellent for you!!! :-D
just GENIAL! and funny.
A really good ilustration too i like it =)
Very nice illustrations! And Funny
The illustrations for your script are quite beautifully done,... good work even though I would suggest working the story just a little bit more close to PENNY
If done at the end the same way it is right now, could make one funny and nice animation
hehehe, hey dude! great!! esta majísimo!
I really like drawing pictures! This is clean and beautiful
äh....gibt es nicht in den original-spot was verdächtig ähnliches? ich mein, du hast das schön illustriert, aber das kann und darf ich einfach nicht honorieren...;) auch, wenn ich jetzt ausgebuht und niedervotiert werde...:(
very nice, 8
Really like it. 9pts
Thanks for all of your comments!!! any suggestions on how to improve this idea?
dont need to.9*
nice. good job
very nice!! =)
maybe a bit to similar to the actual clip of Penny withe mammut.
Really love the illustration, quite a style
great man.. nice idea
really nice idea
good idea and nice presentation :)
this is really nice.
Nice illu and nice idea!! i would love to see it in the tv :D
Really great presentation! 10* :-)
really likeable syle and idea, 8 from me!
Wow! Nice artwork!
Good job! I like the style! I think the idea could work well on tv.
poor little seal :D Really funny!!
EXCELLENT WORK!! FELICITACIONES MARKOS=DDD
Congratulations markocezar !
very nice! you deserve it! congrats!!
... congrats! :-) ...
:D thanks to you all!!!
Great work and congratulation! :)