I hope you remember the movie "Run Lola Run"
:)
I propose the following scenario.
A male (or female) character wakes up in the morning, get out of bed (next to his wife, who sleeps) . He notes that the kitchen is empty. He quickly pulls some clothes on him and started to run. He descends the stairs, in speed, running the streets, then jumps into a taxi. The taxi driver asks "Where?". He responds, "First to Penny!"
Sequence that follows: He prepares coffee in the kitchen. And bring it to bed. Then they both enjoy the moment.
Then the product is presented (in this case, coffee).
pics only for layout
yet this is a sketch! I will come soon with more details (maybe even a movie)! The fact is that in spot it is a romantic morning, and one of the characters trying to prepare breakfast (or morning coffee). When he noticed that in the kitchen, is missing the product that he needs, he run to Penny.
Why did you choose this type of music? I think it takes the speed of the story and the possible tension. Or should the voltage generated by the slow music and the run of him/her? So to speak, by the contrasting speeds. By the way, I would just prefer her as the running person ... on me it would have a more unexpecting effect ...
And especially I say that Penny is presented as something easily accessible.
Predictable... No surprize element here... But Plot is interesting, has great potential...!!
Still working on the project, I will avoid predictability, I assure you:)
If you want to connect it to the movie, it should definitely be a girl who runs (such as Lola)
I think this (as I mentioned above, male or female), it gives great flexibility to the idea. I think Penny would have to choose from, as they want (man as a gentleman or woman who makes a sacrifice to make a surprise):) After all, I do not want to rewrite the screenplay for Run Lola Run. I just found a source of inspiration in this film. And I think that the idea might work very well individually, with male or female.
Thanks for your feedback!
MSTRcollaborator
about 9 years agoHi Bonibom. Hm, I also miss the "surprise moment" - how about this: The man stands in the PENNY Market and realizes when paying his coffee or breakfast, that he is still in underwear? Then maybe something like: "Erstmal zu Penny - you wouldn´t even know that you left your living room" maybe because it´s so comfortable there or good atmosphere, don´t know. Just to give you a little input for the "surprise moment" :-)
Nice video but I think the story is missing the last kick.
@every second idea in this contest is from or with you ;)
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