The only thing that stood out was the penis shot at 0:28.. LoL
where do you have your eyes?
LoL! It's plain to see..one cannot miss it
hehehe, didn´t see one neither :D
Is it your filming? Who is the actor?
yes it´s mine,
the acting guy is andreas uehlein, how do you like his performance?
I like naked boys)
that´s how it should be!
:-D great humour!
btw: nice to see Fuzzy again after a long time!
Ha Ha! Cool video! :)
Great to see the first naked shots here! = )
I actually had a main problem with it one time. (at jovoto) The German law?
Oh! What was it exactly, bert?
I don´t´know, i thought since it is not pornograhic and in this case even an art project, it won´t be a problem. Anyway if it turns out to be one it could very simply be changed, i guess.
i think it has to do with some special kind of degrees of errection a dick is not allowed to be shown
nice video !!
Great sense of humor :)))
I think this is viral advertising. :))) I'm been infected D
ahhh, don´t get me ill, spread the virus :)
Great work! Congrats!
You have a very artistic approach. I like it :)
thank you, it has a lot to do with all the people which were involved, and in special the actor!
Wow - how did you manage the filming (incl. location, actors, light etc.) in such a short time? 10!
Haha, that´s cool!
THANKS for all the positive feedback!!
we had a good small team in creating this shot & i can tell you that andreas (the guy) loves to walk around naked heheh blankziehen
COOLLL one ;-))
IT'S POSSIBLE MORE THAN 10???!!!! ;-))
10 should be enough! THX
That´s clever :-)
Muhaa! Great :D
that´s how it goes! thx
Yeah! Great spot!
thank you sir!
Hm, to me this is a bit lengthy and not very inviting...
thanks for your comment, i go with the majority and think - have actually ever been thinking it is inviting.
do you not like the nudity?
No, that´s not the point. It´s rather the very long start, where nothing seems to happen. If I saw your beginning, I´d probably switch to another video. And the "Abspann" is not really telling me what this project is about. I mentioned this under another idea already, that this is something I miss in nearly all submissions so far. It seems you all want to show your own video skills in the first place and the actual goal to make the project known seems to be secondary. Just my personal view though... ;o)
the video definitely is supposed to be slowly, calm, without music etc , call it dry.
i want it like this, it squeezes out the unorthodoxness of a nude dude coming into lobby.
i think, in difference to all other contests here on jovoto, this contest is supposed to produce works which should built up interest for another - the original global skin contest. so we are not advertising a product, we are already interpretating this contest, that´s what i like too.
if my video couldn´t convince, sorry.
Hm, I´ve got a different pov. I think this video should advertise as well - the product here is the video contest. And like a good ad it should not only rise awareness, but give some information about the "product" as well - my pov again. I think interpretation is the task of the participants of the actual contest. This contest on jovoto should leave the subject as open as possible.
Hope you don´t mind my discussing - I don´t want to denigrate your work. It´s just your explanation that made me want to show another angle. But I´ll be quiet now. Wishing you good luck anyways. ;o)
I have to say I really like this approach.
I don't have a problem with the nudity, but to avoid controversy, maybe you might think to make a version where with the help of the dark light and shadows you can not see the his tool :))
Otherwise I like your point of view!
From your spot I see that textiles (clothes) helps people to integrate and to get along each other. Without clothes things are different.
You might also do exact the opposite version of this spot. Where the naked receptionist is stunned and has the same reaction when the dressed man passes near here. So in this case it's normal to be naked and not to wear clothes :))) I think it might be interesting and also fun to have the same spot presented in two totally different ways.
Good luck! ;)
it really would be nice to make variations of it, BUT the location isn´t available for me just by snapping fingers :)
but i still think that nudity in context with the cultural connontation of clothes is the key not only of this contest but of the global-skin movie from the organisators
anyway, thx for your comment!
I understand that the location it's not up to you. And I agree with your second sentence.
Good luck and looking forward to see more ideas!
great comment Alexandru!
in case you don´t know, i uploaded an alternative version with music now, just check it!
Just saw your update! And I like it! :) And you no what?! There is no more tool :)))
And thanks Bastian! I appreciate it. I'm just trying to be helpful :)
Du magst ...ah english... :( okokok! ;-)
You like to let this video "dry" as you said. I think it´s ok, it´s kind of the humour you also have with Loriot or HElge Schneider movies in my opinion. So it attracks certain kind of people and others not maybe, but it´s always a matter of taste.
BUT: You know what I could really imagine? A music from a radio, a kind of happy slow jazz tune, just in the background. I think, this could underline the act just perfect. It would make the naked man AND the shocked woman even more funnier (if that was an intention). Cool wär dann natürlich noch, wenn das Lied irgendwie subtil auf die Situation anspielt, ah english... grrr: So maybe the song could be called: "Walking naked in my shoes" or something like that :D
Just some brain storming here.
ok, sure, i could give it a try with integrating some kind of music,
there´s a lot of good creative commons music on the net, even for commercial purposes..
if i upload a version with music, does the first version still retain its status as an official entry?
if you upload a second version of the movie, you can chose which one will be shown first. You can for example start the video with a little note saying "alternative version with music" and list it as the second media in your entry :-)
hehe, just in this second i did exactly that!
Maybe u need a little more explenation...And maybe to put some music in it, i suggest something scary like from the X files.That would be great. ;) Anyway good start.
just did that, there is a second altenative version with music, just check it & let me know what you´re thinking of this!
I like the humor in this video very much. I think the 2nd version with the music and the banner coming across is better developed. The movement of the banner isn't super smooth towards the end, but I could just being picky!
And another suggestion for copy, "What's your relationship to textiles?" - "Tell us your story.."
I think it's shocking enough to get peoples attention but also provides enough information across about the global skin! Great job :-)
I agree, the music is perfect! BUT: You have the music coming from the OFF, you should try to remix it making it sound like coming from a radio from the original set. A quiet background music from the radio would underline this scene much better than the original music from the Off. This way I think it could feel better for the viewer. Just my opinion :-)
hi jess & mstr! thx for the feedback
i try to integrate your suggestions which are all reasonable.
for sure i will make another version to get everybody satisfied ;)
i am only a lttle bit afraid to get too much away from the first/original version, ´cause so much people liked it, maybe i mixture of all will do, meaning the better textintegration of version2 & the right voluminzing of the music,
let´s see :)
If you want, I can help you with the audio!
All suggestions are only a matter of taste, in the end, YOU decide what you want to change or not :-) That´s something I enjoy on Jovoto: the FEEDBACK, it´s always interesting to see how others would turn an idea around, or add things that we as the creator don´t see, because we´re "too close" to the idea.
thx dude, i just made a version with ON instead OFF-music, it´s encoding right now..
Haha, I think it´s cooler this way, what do you say? Especially because now you hear the "movement" of the naked guy better.
oh yeah i like it, 10 points from me :D
Looking at your german translation I thought, "what's your experience with textiles?" that also works quite well in english!
Super update! Love to see great ideas, feedback and development!
Great idea and video! From the beginning I liked the atmosphere, but your update , especially with ON-music, make it perfect to me! ;o)
great you like it, last but not least the community helped to develop it to this point
I like the second one, it is better with the slide in the end. Nice idea!
yea, trying to keep it HIGH, thx!
The end of the song in video Nr. 4 is: "then you caught my eye as you walked on by" but it sounds like "than you cut my ei..." lol thats funny!!!! ... sorry :)
if looks could kill :)
Please do not be angry! I'm quiet now ... giggle :) ... cut my ... 00 :)))))))))))
uh that wasn´t meant on you :)
Super update! Love to see you trying different possibilities :D
Can you hear it? It sounds like "winner, winner, winner!!!" I really love this video, I would not modify any pixel of the project!!!
what did you say? can´t hear you..
thanks for your compliment!
Very good update :-)
thanks. cool you like it!
cool you like it, thanks!
Humor is definitely an effective vehicle for a message, great aproach
thank you smoky cat!
Like it. I also like the quality of the shot material. Good job.
Just some comments, The end chart with "What's your experience with textiles"
Have you considered moving the text left to right at the same time that the white background is being masked in? Maybe it could look nice.
The kerning is wrong in "What's" The space between the "t" and the "''" is too big as is the space between the "'" and the "s"
thanks searchserge for your detailed critic, i appreciate it very much.
you seem to look very detailed on some aspects like the "wrong" kerning. i was "just" using the kerning photoshop gave me for this font, also the banner and text moving soeed has its reason because of the walkingspeed of the man and the penis which should be hidden by the banner.
thx anyway & feel free to support this clip :)
I wasn't talking about the speed of the white area. Of course the point is to hide the background! I just thought that the white rectangle and the text could be animated in another way. Instead of masking the text area, you could try moving it from the left to right such that it is the same area of your mask.
The difference is that you have the right edges of your text "leading" into the picture.
And yeah...photoshop kerning is often wrong...
ah ok now i got it, let´s see if i will find some time to have a look at this
Very good idea!
i'm half way through the projects in this contest and so far this is the best idea i've seen. clever, simple and with has a great potential to become a viral.
ok, i'm back. saw all the projects here and i tell you this : yours is the best
thanks mi5hel, hopefully this transforms into the final rating :)
hehe! nice one kuesti! has good mood. good luck! I like the microstory behind it. well done
great to hear gusmonk! thx
yo it was a while but yes, thx!
nice video, very simple but with lot of concecpt, and funny too.
hammer keule! thx bg!
Funny and eye catching, very good : )
Another great video... nice concept.
Great video, funny and very well executed, love the misterious light. Congrats.
One of my favourites, congrats!!!
Großes Kino! Super! Herzlichen Glückwunsch!!!
Your other one was my fave!! What does it matter though? Congratulations mate :D
Congratz, Kuesti - although I liked your other video way better! ;o)
Powerful and remarkable job here.
woww!!! big big thanks to all for liking my work
i guess it was a really really close race at the end
looking forward to the further licensed videos!
Congrats kuesti - this video was one of my favorites!
Congratulations kuesti : )
GRATULATION!!! 3. Platz & sold idea - wohlverdient! :-)
CONGRAAATS kuesti for your winning and sold idea!!!
Congrats and good job!
congratulations ! :)
! ! ! C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S ! ! !
Congratulations Kuesti!!! :)