I like how you design the R. The Slide no. 2 is better in the front!
Why do you accent the R letter? You should concentrate on tha U, isn`t it clear from the briefing?
1st how sad that? // 2nd why you don´t play in arrogant manners elsewhere?
I am sorry if you think I am arrogant, I am trying to give you an advice so you can move on and improve your proposal.