It is inspired from the Fireworks festival held every Saturday on the Darling Harbour, Sydney.
Your Swiss Army Knife 2016
Oh nice, really nice - I like them both! I could also imagine the 2 patterns as 2 separate designs / entires.
About the front design: on your 2nd slide the pattern is more aligned in the middle (the little pointy part of the bottom of the logo meets the shape of your
... meets the shape of your V) That way it looks more balanced to me than in your cover slide! Maybe you can change it there and have the same in all slides? Thanks! I hope it's clear what I meant :P
Hey Dora, I know what you're saying here but I think the designer was avoiding symmetry! and rather finding a balance with the natural brush stroke of their graphic, wabi sabi! haha but your suggestion works too!
Thankyou for the feedback Dora. I will try to change the layout to make it more balanced and maybe make two diff design entries from them.
This is a very nice design! I like the version with two different backgrounds.
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