Hi Diana. This is sure a yummy idea! Great composition also. A couple minor comments. I think you need to increase the contrast overall, especially the strawberries on the front. I think of strawberries as being a deep red, your's are a bit pastel. Also maybe you could make the faces more noticeable, and add some shading to the berries on the back, they'll look more convincing. Good Luck!
Really nice design! However you should reduce the use of colors. I suggest you to red the halftime feedback:
https://www.jovoto.com/projects/victorinox2019/briefing#inner-feedback-box
Aren't those strawberries so happy to be surrounded by so much chocolate?! Yes they are! Great mood in your illustration, Diana. Good luck!
Ps: the strawberry on the back at the bottom looks a bit weird covered in chocolate (like brain). Is it only me seeing that? :)
Let's make a recap: it's colourful, playful, funny, cute, cool, there are strawberries and chocolate. In one word: perfect!
Thank you so much :D! I saw your work and it´s fantastic, good luck!!
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