I think your concept is great,
but, please, change the slide: make me think of child labor :(
So now every grand parent should stop teaching a grand kid a hobby? What if this picture was really the kid helping the elderly because the elderly has macular degeneration desease ( can't see well anymore). I will try to think of another picture :-)
Nice one Antoine!
I actually received a toy threader ( I hope that's what it's called in English) when I was small , very similar to the one in the image and I loved it.
All that being said personally, I find the ant imagery more striking and to the point - they are equals where the other one suggests, to me, a more tutoring feel.
good luck !
Thank you so much Irina! :-) What I am trying to express is the "Collaboration" idea because the theme of the contest is collaboration, NOT just videoconferencing, as some of the other submissions suggest. If Cisco wanted a campaign for Teleconferencing they would have requested just that, not "collaboration"...
Don't get angry ...
I only told my impression on the image,
but I also said that the idea is good :)
Lovely! Great way to express collaboration. :)
I need votes! :-)
Thanks Lozo. I was not angry :-) but I agree more with Irina when she says that the first picture expresses more tutoring, or mentoring...not child labor.
Hmmm, multithreaded... Interesting concept. A lot can come out from here.
thats the idea, but you can change the copy
Please sort all the projects by date and you can see that I submitted the idea long before you. I did not copy you, my idea was there before yours. Thanks
Utilizing nature as a collaboration inspiration is very smart. Your first slide is excellent, keep going in this vein. Ants work very hard- together. We have a lot to learn from the time tested society collaboration of animals and insects. Good job. 7* for concept, love to see more slides :)
Only 7 ;-(
yeah only 7. You should be happy to get that. Many people rate a 1 or 2. I like your concept and a 7 is a decent vote in the beginning. This leaves me with three points to raise you after more updates throughout the week.
Ueah, but it is not winning. The winner is actually not following the rules stated in the debrief! People do not read :-(
I was working on the Beehive idea just before I uploaded I opened your project and there it was! I was going with .. a small world.. a huge collaboration plan. I m glad I saw it on time!
I think it is a great way to explore collaboration in nature! so I can give yours all my stars!
Thanks a lot! :-)
nice graphic, i love the ants! :D
Thanks a lot! I need votes :-)
it is very hard to read the text, fyi. it's maybe just my eyes. the colors are making it difficult to pick out the letters, if you know what i mean?
I know, but Jovoto does not let me take down a picture to fix it :-(
Make a slide that says "OLD" and put your old slides behind that, and the new ones in front :)
O you did....well I like your idea! do not be discouraged.
these are becoming much easier to read. i like the shading behind the letters at the bottom, although "moves mountains" is still difficult to read. i LOVE the sayings, especially how short and pointed they are! very impressive, as they each speak for themselves. the only reservation i make is the sustainability one, just because i don't get it. is there a more sustainable animal? how about a beaver?
Lol, no the 2 birds are building a nest together to live in ( they are collaborating on building their own sustainability)...