Nobody is an island!
I understand what you are trying to get across but I am worried that it is a little confusing along that way. I might suggest that you push this a little further to get your message across a lot more clear to your audience.
This is a great image, very eye catching. Can we change the phrasing to show more of a call to action or question, like "Are you stuck on an island?" or "you don't want to be stuck on an island" Does that make sense?
I will not change the phrase, becouse it is philosofical concept created by John Donne and it should provoke reflection about isolation. We are not isolated individuals... We can only function if we collaborate one with the other.
I like the idea of " stuck on an island!" and I will develope something in that direction... Thanks for the inspirational push. ??????????????
This is certainly eye-catching and that's good. The message is simple and most of all true. If it's meant to make one realize how they are already collaborating in many aspects of their existence and how they should extend that I think you did a good job!
I'll be back for updates, good luck !
I appreciate inteligent thought like that!
I get your message just by looking the image.. I dont understand what is so difficult to follow so that you have to change it..
("No man's an island" is the original phrase) and I think is famous enough..
And what if you are actually stuck on an island.. Alone.. who you will collaborate with? :)
I like what I see..
Thank you! I am glad there are bright minds like yours!
"No man's an island" is in fact the original phrase but I changed it becouse nowadays so many women are doing an equal or even better job then men, that I had to change it to "nobody" .
hehe good point! but "man" is also used for humanity as a whole, and John Donne - i want to believe used it for mankind-
The only reason I mentioned this is because i dont think you have to be brilliant or smtg when you can just google the phrase! It wouldnt hurt people receiving this email (as cisco is planning) to do some search..not everything has to be served on a plate:) (greek saying lol). "Hidden" messages are more intriguing arent they?
You are right, but back in 1624 men provided and women served! Only "man" counted. That changed. Today a man is man, a woman is a woman and nobody is everybody!
I was thinking about the movie castaway (Tom Hanks) first. Would be a good visual too. "What happend if you can't collaborate"
Love the claim. The explanation could do more, tho...
The image is appealing and eyecatching.
This image is so very striking, it even stands out as a thumbnail! Could you please create some more (similar) images that take this concept even further? I could see this as a campaign and it would need more than one execution. I would really love to see some more work from you in this vein.
This is funny.
Like it. Simple and good idea. I expect to see other pictures of this concept.
very funny. love the pic. but the words make me think twice about putting the pic with this phrase.... why? because if nobody is an island, then why is this man an island? haha. perhaps that's why i like it so much. the irony really cracks me up, and i think you could make it MORE obvious. How? like perhaps the campaign is posters and instead of the guy's face you look into the poster and see a MIRROR, so you see yourself, meaning, "YOU are not an island"
The first pic in your update is my favorite. He looks desperate with a searching gaze. I guess your update means I'll have to update my rating ;)
Yes... please Irina!
Done - loving this, full stars and all the works :))
funny faces :) 10 points for slide 3 ;)
It's cool! great visual. How about creating a version with more than one island/face. That will look awesome, because then the faces can look at each other and decide: will I stay a lonesome Island forever, or will I talk to my neighbor island and see what comes out of it?
I love the islandfaces :) 9* good luck!
interesting islands! I wanna see more ! Good luck!
I appreciate your work. good and simple idea! Images speak for themselves. 9*
like the images, but maybe to similar, good be more variable in my opinion, anyway good work
Great concept! Like the idea. 10*
like the idea of an island, maybe you could write different text for different reasons to collaborate, so they are a bit to similar imo, keep going, it's really worth i think
ahh! i just noticed that your concept is quite similar to one of the ideas i submitted last night. my apologies, i did not know someone had already done the "no man is an island" concept.
your execution is much better than mine, too. :)
Second poster is the best one... but sometnihg is missing. NIce idea.
true story, nobody is an island! Great perspective!
Nobody is an island! Excellent! =)
Clever idea and visually very strong!
very good, i gave my ten some days ago ( but wasn't able to write you, becuase jovoto was in trouble) anyhow good luck !!!
like it, very strong