I believe that technology is the best intermedium for an efficient collaboration.
I think that this is a good message but a little off brief. I feel that even though we are promoting the use of collaboration through technology there is still a person on the other side collaborating with you on the idea. I would suggest bring more of a human element in to this concept to push it a bit further.
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Please read the briefing again carefully. And use a simple typo.
I like the idea. (sorry forgot to mention)
well use of technology good start