-adj; having no haven to go back to and be safe.
Home cannot be replaced by anything, and a child has the right to a propper one.
Your Brillant Texts for Child Rights
I am a big fan of short definitions. They are effective and easy to remember!
But it has to fit to the campaign. I'm missing where it should lead to.
Charles has a point, I also think your text would ne stronger if there was some kind of link at the ned - what should children have instead of no home? what's linked to the problem? what's their right?
Thanks a lot you three for the usefull comments :) The link has been added, again in a short and direct way.
Like this one even better than your other one, as it´s emotional and yet to the point. What about simply adding -> family. This would be a proper link that fits to the campaign imo. What do you think?
WOW thanks a lot. You think like adding family as a definition, another entry?
Yes, like in real dictionaries. Have a look at the original idea (linked on the briefing site). Many other entries here do this. And I think, this is what Charles and Frieda mean. Then it will fit to the campaign even better.
hehehe thanks again dearie :) very glad you like it :) :)
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